Writer's Grove

Welcome to the new site!

December 7, 2010

Hello everyone! Whether you followed me before on Blogger or are new here, I’m happy you stopped by! I hope you’ll take time to explore the site and come back here to the blog often!

Commenting is super easy. Go to the permalink for the post (if you’re not already there) by either clicking on the post title or on the link at the bottom of the post. The comment field will appear. Type in your name, do a basic math problem to prevent spam, and you’re good to go. You don’t have to register or fill in those fields with your email address and website. If someone gets ridiculous I may have to tighten up the rules, but right now the optimist in me prefers to believe that people are inherently good and I’ll never have to do that.

The blog will continue to be tweaked/expanded; I need to put in some links to my compatriots in The League of Reluctant Adults on the sidebar, and of course I’m going to play around with fonts and colors and so on, but at least right now we’re functional.

I gotta give a shout-out to my site designer, Sean Akers. He’s done a stunning job here and he’s been tremendously helpful. Here’s what it’s like to work with Sean:

Me: Can we do that one thing with the doohickey to make it cool and then do (incoherent babble) with the other page?

Sean: Yes.

See? He’s awesome! If you want/need a spiffy website, head over to check out his portfolio and tell him I sent you.

The Goodies page will be expanded in the coming weeks and months because I like providing free goodies. One thing that will show up there for sure is a free short story. That will come out prior to the release of Hounded. There will be more reviews on the Reviews page as we get closer to publication; you can laugh at the picture of five-year old me on the About Kevin page (and wish YOU had a vintage Spider-Man shirt like that); and there are a couple of new email addresses you can use on the Contact page if you’d like to shoot me a message. Again, welcome! Hope to hear from you soon!

Sentence Envy

December 4, 2010

Sometimes I congratulate myself for something I’ve written, a sentence or a phrase that I think is fairly succulent and worth chewing on for a while. But most of the time, when I read, I’m struck by Sentence Envy. Other authors write delicious things I wish I’d written. But there’s one particular author who writes sentences that just get in my head and kind of turn in circles, like a dog settling down for a nap, and then they rest there, fat and sassy, a tether to a different world. It’s William Gibson. Here’s what I mean:

The receptionist in the cool gray anteroom of the Galerie Duperey might well have grown there, a lovely and likely poisonous plant, rooted behind a slab of polished marble inlaid with an enameled keyboard. —Count Zero

His eyes were eggs of unstable crystal, vibrating with a frequency whose name was rain and the sound of trains, suddenly sprouting a humming forest of hair-fine glass spines. —Neuromancer

“Call him,” he repeated, wrapped in Japanese herringbone Gore-tex, multiply flapped and counterintuitively buckled. —Zero History

His worlds are at once slick and dissonant, a polished surface with an invisible coating of malice on top, constant tension embedded in the language itself. I can’t write like that, but I’m glad somebody does. If you’ve never read Gibson, you’re missing out one of the premier wordsmiths of our time.

Does anyone else get struck by Sentence Envy?

Stuff They Never Told Me About Publishing #1

December 1, 2010

You know those video games where all of the unexplored portions of the map are covered in darkness—they call it “fog,” and you have to go there to reveal what’s hiding? And sometimes the stuff that’s hiding is freakin’ awesome (like a special weapon or nummy digital food or an extra life), and sometimes it’s an obstacle you can’t get around and you have to go another way, and sometimes it’s stuff that wants to slay you and splatter your viscera on the walls? Publishing is kind of like that, except for the splattering viscera. The sense of adventure is really honkin’ cool, so if you’d like to learn everything as you go, then by all means, stop reading now. But for those aspiring writers who’d like to know, I thought I’d share a few things I didn’t find out about publishing until after the deal was made and I started walking through the fog. This will be an ongoing series with absolutely zero splattered viscera.

Book tours aren’t cost effective.

I’ve been surprised at how many people ask me if I’m going on a book signing tour. There seems to be an assumption that all authors do it. I knew that couldn’t possibly be the case before I signed my deal, but I didn’t know the reason why. I discovered that, economically, it’s not sensible for a publisher to lay out that kind of bread—airfare, hotels, meals and so on—when you might get twenty to sixty people showing up to buy a book at any given site. The publisher’s money would be better spent on marketing and social media networks. Most authors you hear/see doing tours have established reputations or prior celebrity status and are sure to draw big crowds of fanboys and fangirls. But debut authors like me? Nah. It doesn’t make sense to expect people to skip their favorite TV show and go to Borders on a Wednesday night to meet a dude they’ve never heard of before. What I’ll probably do is a few signings in Arizona because the books are set here, but that will be it to begin with. I’ll continue to appear locally as often as I can because it’ll be on my own dime. But honestly, a large part of this process is still in the fog for me, because from what I understand signings don’t get arranged until a couple months from the release date, and I’m still four and half months out.

You need a platform.

You have to blog and tweet “and stuff.” If you do it well, then you have this thing called a platform, and this is something you absolutely must have. Everybody says so. But here I must confess that I’m not too clear on why. It’s kind of like the importance of getting good grades in high school: all the adults tell you it’s vital for your future, and so you study for the quadratic equation test because you hope it will make sense someday. That’s kind of what I’m doing with my blog. I try to provide some info for aspiring writers (because I know what it’s like to be one) and some entertainment as well (mostly for myself), but I’m sort of in a continuous cringe, waiting for someone to swoop in and say, “No, no, no, McFly, you’re doing it wrong!” And I’m also waiting for someone to explain exactly how x number of followers on my blog or on Twitter translates into x number of sales I wouldn’t have had otherwise. I don’t mind blogging or tweeting—I enjoy both quite a bit! But I don’t understand how the mechanics of this platform thing truly works. (Does anyone? I’ve heard of social media experts, but I don’t know them socially, so how expert can they be, right?) This is one of those things that don’t get adequately explained to newbie authors and thus you might as well get used to it. You need a platform because everyone says so and everyone’s doing it. Now go and build one, and don’t forget to write your next book. ;)

There are many people involved in publishing a book, and they’re all awesome.

Agent. Editor. (Those are the two I knew about because those are the people aspiring writers are understandably obsessed with getting to.) But since the deal, I’ve played jokes on my Assistant Editor and have been pranked in return. And then there’s the Copy Editor. Managing Editor. Marketing Dude. Publicity Dude. (Marketing and Publicity are two different departments and I didn’t know that before; I know who my marketing fella is, but I don’t know who’s in charge of my publicity yet—that’s still in the fog.) Typesetting House. Art Director. Photographer. Model. Digital Artist. A department of people who deal with Subsidiary Rights. The nice lady at the security checkpoint in the Random House building who prevented me from injuring myself. There’s somebody named Phil in Accounting and he sounds like a cool cat. And then there’s the printer, of course, and the people in Sales who take my book to the buyers for the bookstores and say LOOK, THIS BOOK IS FRICKIN’ RAD AND I WILL BE YOUR BEST FRIEND IF YOU MAKE YOUR EMPLOYEES TACKLE YOUR CUSTOMERS AND THRUST IT INTO THEIR HANDS! And we can’t forget the distributor, the warehouse workers, the nice guys who drive my books around, and the spiffy people who work in bookstores and never tackle their customers. I’m sure there are plenty more but I’m not aware of their existence yet. All those people have buttloads of work to do to make sure my book hits the shelves on time and calls to people with the lure of a siren. They come online at different stages of the process and I couldn’t possibly thank them all, but once you think about it, it makes sense why it takes about a year for a book to get “out there.” And it also makes sense why self-publishing often doesn’t work out so well; it’s because you’re trying to do all those jobs yourself and you can’t.

That’s all for this installment. If you’d like to hear about something specific, let me know. :)

Write more

November 27, 2010

When it comes to writing novels only one thing is easier—knowing I’ll finish. I have a confidence there where there used to be gnawing uncertainty that I might be wasting my time. Now I know that I can probably crank out two a year if I have an outline for them. That’s vastly comforting. But there are other parts to the writing process that will never get easier.

1. Revising. There aren’t any shortcuts. I revise quite a bit before my agent and editors take a peek, and then revise more after they give me their comments. I don’t think anyone writes the Golden Draft…maybe I’ll produce a copper or bronze one someday. :)

2. Waiting. Once I send work to my agent, he sends it out on submission…and I wait. Sometimes the wait isn’t all that long, but sometimes it’s months. I try to deal with it by writing more. And if there’s a deal, then there’s another wait on the contract (which is where your agent truly earns his money and is worth every penny of his commission). Sometimes that wait is only a month or so, but I’ve also had to wait close to a year because of problems with boilerplate contracts, and my agent had to take on Viking Death Ships full of lawyers. (Luckily, he ate his spinach.) And after the contract is finished and you sign it, there’s another wait for the money to arrive—anywhere from a couple of weeks to three months, depending on where it’s coming from. If there isn’t a deal, well then…

3. Rejection. It still happens. Getting published once isn’t a golden ticket to getting published again, and getting published in the U.S. doesn’t mean other countries are going to hand over bags of money for translation rights. One market will look at my series and say “Gimme!” and another will look at it and say “Meh.” The answer to rejection, like waiting, is to write more, because otherwise I might chew glass.

4. Fear of #3. Even though I now know beyond a shadow of a doubt that I’m capable of writing publishable books, I still look at my writing at times and conclude that it isn’t good enough. “Whine,” I say to my wife, “whine whine this sucks whine whine.” She tells me to shut up, I do, and write more. It’s the only thing that can possibly make the sucking stop, after all.

Right now I’m enjoying coffee with this seasonal creamer in it—it’s called marshmallow mocha. Mmm. Hope you’re taking advantage of the season’s opportunities for warm, comfy drinks. And writing more.

It’s piñata time

November 25, 2010

I’ve always enjoyed my family tradition for Thanksgiving, but didn’t realize it was out of the mainstream at first. I thought with a certain naïveté that since everyone got the day off and everyone was talking turkey, everyone must celebrate it the same way too. Eventually, after seeing several movies of people indoors and not beating the shit out of a piñata, I hypothesized that maybe my family did things a bit differently. To test it, I asked a school friend after Thanksgiving, “So what did you get out of your piñata?” and received a look of complete bewilderment in return. That clinched it. My family was the strange one. But also very cool.

We go out to the desert and have Thanksgiving dinner outdoors. We can do that because it’s Arizona, and nine years out of ten the weather is just fine on the fourth Thursday of November. Refusing to succumb to food comas, we then climb a hill with a beautiful view of Rio Verde and some almond orchards, snap a few pictures, then climb back down and ritualistically, mercilessly, joyfully thrash an innocent piñata to death. Don’t judge; it’s great fun and we bond over the shared violence, and besides, that papier mâché had it coming.

There is much to give thanks for this year. Hope you have many blessings to count and you enjoy lots of warm fuzzies, and maybe hot chocolate with marshmallows.

Release date moved up!

November 22, 2010

I have always wanted to time travel, and for a while I held on to a tiny dream that one day I would find someone like Doc Brown, and he’d have a flux capacitor in a blue Shelby Mustang, and once we got hold of 1.21 jigowatts of electricity (the movie’s approximation of gigawatts), we’d be golden. We (the Doc and I) would go back and see Hamlet when it first debuted in Elizabethan England, and then we’d most likely catch the plague and die. Or get hanged as witches. Today that dream sort of came true.

I didn’t find a Doc Brown, but I did receive notice that my long wait for publication has just been shortened by a week. The release date for Hounded has been moved up from April 26 to a NEW! EARLIER! date of April 19! So in a way it’s like I skipped a week of time there. And so did everyone who pre-orders the book or buys it the first week! All those lucky people have become time travelers and probably would be justified in becoming a bit snooty about it. I’m a wee bit saddened that it didn’t involve a tricked-out Mustang (or a ride in Dr. Who’s TARDIS—bow ties are cool), but I’m certainly not going to complain. A shorter wait is just one more thing to give thanks for on Thursday.

Weekend Update

November 20, 2010

1. I’m frustrated that I can’t seem to watch Sharktopus on demand. I’ve seen the trailers and it’s chock full of ridiculous. The kind of movie where you just sit down with some friends and popcorn and laugh. I don’t troll the TV enough to catch it when it’s on the Syfy Channel, and it’s a shame, because I think it has the potential to be a B (or C) movie classic.

2. My school’s football team advanced in the state playoffs last night. They’re in the final four; it’s the best they’ve ever done. I won’t get to announce anymore, though, since it must be in a neutral location and I’m not a neutral announcer.

3. Going to see Harry Potter at some point this weekend; kid is looking forward to it, to put it mildly.

4. Author Stacia Kane put up a great post about copyright and if you’re a writer (or a reader) you should check it out.

5. My webmaster dude (IT term) is working on my site and what I’ve seen of it so far is pretty spiffy.

6. For two whole days this week, I had nothing to grade. It was awesome. But now I have a giant stack of essays to look over, so I’d better get to it.

7. All three books now have their cover art up at Amazon! And (ahem) they’re available for preorder! :)

Happy Tidings

November 17, 2010

1. By this time tomorrow I will be caught up on my grading—only happens eight times a year! But I’m not quite caught up yet, so this will have to be quick.

2. Gaius Baltar is dead. He died in the Suvudu Cage Match at the hands of mouse-clicking George R.R. Martin fans, despite the fact that he had a gun and his opponent had a sword. The happy bit about this is that I had a wonderful time writing up those little scenarios.

3. The Iron Druid Chronicles will be translated into Thai and Russian! Very grateful to Tathata publishers in Thailand and Olma Press in Russia, and extremely excited to see the covers!

4. It’s just about marshmallow season.

Still Life with Dwarfs and Beer #6

November 13, 2010

It’s been a while since I’ve done one of these, but I finally scored a beer I’ve been looking for and I had to write it up. My writing/blogging friend Hillary Jacques told me about it and claimed it was to die for; I have taken her at her word because she’s from Alaska, and people have died for stranger things than beer in the land of salmon and short summers.

The beer is Alaskan Smoked Porter, and it comes in big ol’ dated bottles. For such an august brew I broke out the seminal autumn cuisine and a very serious dwarf to guard it.

That’s a grilled brat with sauerkraut and mustard, accompanied by some kettle chips. The Alaskan Smoked Porter stands majestically to one side. And on duty today from the dwarf kingdom is Einar Ericksson, high atop the seeded bun, shining a light in the dark cave of tasteless beers and leading us to liquid gold.

Einar’s motto (“I seek treasure and beer and often don’t know the difference”) is an example for us all. And in truth, he’s something of an archetypal character, guiding us through menus of tasteless swill to find a brew with gustatory substance. Do you doubt his archetypal muscle? Behold:

See, they’re really the same guy. The hermit is a bit longer in the femur, that’s all. And maybe he could use a Snickers bar. But Einar is carryin’ a freakin’ GUN, son! That’s because he can lead you through the mines past the Balrog to the legendary casks of Shaft-Aged Scrumptious Shit, brewed by the celebrated hopmaster Steinar Thorvaldsson. And if any demons from the old world show up to try to mooch a pint, Einar will pop the bastard between the eyes with a black powder ball! Ain’t nobody gonna snake my Smoked Porter with Einar on the job.

Speaking of which: I can see why so many Alaskans have died for this noble brew. Jerry Hoffman of Fairbanks lost his life when he attacked a Kodiak bear trying to break into his cooler of Smoked Porter; he was armed with nothing but a pair of BBQ tongs. Fisherman John O’Bryan of Anchorage accidentally dropped an unopened bottle in the sea, dove after it, and got eaten by an orca that mistook him for wayward chum. (“Carry On, My Wayward Chum” is the unofficial anthem of Alaskan fishermen.) If you get a chance to snag a bottle, do—you can always age it in your silver mine for a few years if you don’t have occasion to drink it right away. It’s awesome.

Goodreads

November 11, 2010

Don’t know if you’ve ever checked out Goodreads.com or not, but I dig it and I’m “there” now as an author if you’d like to click over there and say howdy. You can friend me there or follow me as a fan (I think?) and my blog posts will update there too. I’m not going to attempt to rate all the books I’ve read because that would take a looong time, but I do enjoy putting some things up and comparing my ratings with others, especially my friend Alan, who tends not to like things as much as I do. He’s a bit more critical than I am, and that’s a good thing, believe me, because he’s my alpha reader and I don’t know what I’d do without his insights. Usually I’ll give four or five stars to things or I won’t rate it at all, proceeding on the maxim if you don’t have anything nice to say…you know. The exception to this rule is Charles Dickens. I delight in giving his books one star. I might be the only person in the world who despises Charles Dickens, but I’m grateful to Goodreads for giving me a forum to express my wintry discontent with so little effort.

The other thing that’s really cool about Goodreads is the ability to get some ideas on what to read next…and I’m almost to the point where I’ll need something soon. I’ve been making progress through my pile o’ books and I’m just about caught up. I think I have found a candidate for the next one…it’s called Hunger by Jackie Kessler. It’s about one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. Know why I’m going to read it? Because of this picture right here:

That’s Neil Gaiman holding Hunger. That’s all I needed to know. Put that on my TBR pile.

Also, my cover is getting “out there” and I’m very happy to see that people tend to like it. A lot. Here’s a blog where it appeared recently—she got the photos from my Twitter feed, so thanks to Persephone for following my tweets!

And today I will leave you with a gratuitous photo of my Boston Terrier, Sophie: